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Sample 2019 Miracle Talent Education (Hong Kong) Limited All Rights ReservedCONTENTPART 1: GENERAL1. How to Achieve Appropriacy – by Genre1.1 Formal/ Semi-formal/ Informal Genres1.2 Six Methods to Transform an Informal Essay into a Formal One1.3 Practices2. Specific Language & Organization Skills for Paper 32.1 Language Skills for Paper 32.2 Organization Skills for Paper 3PART 2: FORMAL3. Formal Letter/ Email3.1 General Points to be Noted3.2 Transformation Exercise: Informal Letter to Formal Letter4. Letter of Reply/ Defensive Letter4.1 Template4.2 Letter of Reply Sample Essay (2014 Paper 3 Part B Task 10)2

Sample 2019 Miracle Talent Education (Hong Kong) Limited All Rights Reserved4.3 Letter of Reply Sample Essay (2015 Paper 3 Part B Task 9)4.4 Letter of Reply Sample Essay (2016 Paper 3 Part B Task 8)5. Application Letter5.1 Application Letter Template5.2 Application Letter Sample Essay (1)5.3 Application Letter Sample Essay (2)6. Report/ Summary6.1 General Reminders6.2 Report Sample Essay (2016 Paper 3B Task 10)6.3 Summary Sample Essay (2017 Paper 3B Task 8)7. Letter of Complaint7.1 Complaint Letter: Introduction7.2 Complaint Letter: Steps for each paragraph7.3 Common Complaints (for 1-4)7.4 Feelings (Step 5)7.5 Optional steps to gain additional marks (Step 6-7)7.6 Ending Templates7.7 Complaint Letter Sample Essay3

Sample 2019 Miracle Talent Education (Hong Kong) Limited All Rights ReservedPART 3: SEMI-FORMAL8. Speech/ Debate Speech8.1 Speech/ Debate Speech Template8.2 Speech Sample Essay8.3 Debate Speech Sample Essay9. Feature Article/ Article9.1 Feature Article Template/ Skills9.2 Feature Article Sample Essay (1)9.3 Feature Article Sample Essay (2) (2016 Paper 3B Task 9)PART 4: INFORMAL10. Personal Letter10.1 Personal Letter: Introduction Template10.2 Personal Letter: Template for giving advice10.3 Personal Letter: Increasing intimacy10.4 Personal Letter: Ending Template10.5 Personal Letter Sample Essay (1) (2018 DSE Paper 2 Q4)10.6 Personal Letter Sample Essay (2)10.7 Personal Letter Sample Essay (3)4

Sample 2019 Miracle Talent Education (Hong Kong) Limited All Rights Reserved2. Specific Language & OrganizationSkills (Paper 3)2.1 Language Skills for Paper 31) Change in Part of SpeechVerb à NounAmocatchiconcludes The conclusion drawn bythat the best advice for Amocatchi is that thelisteners is to avoid best advice for listenersconfusion by reverting to is to avoid confusion bya neutral position.reverting to a neutralposition.Noun à VerbMary has made several Marysuggestionsregarding severalthis assuggestedmethodstotackle the issue.à Peter is successful in Peter is running his shoprunning his shop.à Pleasecheckyour Please be careful whenanswers carefully.à Customerssuccessfully.arechecking your answers.angry Theabout the unsatisfactory serviceservice.unsatisfactoryhasarousedanger among customers.12

Sample 2019 Miracle Talent Education (Hong Kong) Limited All Rights ReservedVerbAdjectiveà People who failed in the People who faced failurepast may succeed in the in the past may attainfuture.AdjectiveVerbsuccess in the future.à It was really frustrating It frustrates me that thethat the staff wouldn’t staff wouldn’t take thetake the time to answer timemy questions.toanswermyquestions.2) Change in Passive/Active VoiceActive à Passive Companiescan More charity events canorganize more charity beevents.organizedbycompanies.Passive à Active A lot of effort has been Mary has made a lot ofmade to achieve the effort to achieve theresult.result.3) Participle Phrase (function as adjectives)V-edMany emigrants will Plaguedbyeventually return to homesickness,theirhomelandas emigrants will eventuallythey are plagued by returnhomesickness.13manyhomeland.totheir

Sample 2019 Miracle Talent Education (Hong Kong) Limited All Rights Reserved2.2 Organization Skills for Paper 3 Unlike Paper 2, you will not have time for “fancy” topic sentence/concluding sentence. However, please still try your best toinclude a topic sentence at the beginning of each paragraph. The use of subject/ title/ headings/ sub-headings is crucial insome genres, e.g. report/ summary/ article (the subject/ titlealone may account for 1 point already)o These will be covered in detail in later sessions Linkage between points is the key to score high in coherence:Simple linkageAndAs wellAll full-time staff members will be trained tohandle valuable items properly as well.Also (in the middle of On top of that, we would also like to requesta sentence)yourpermissionfordisplayingtheOn top of thatphotographs of the plough in our newmuseum posters.On top of these, we have launched the“Operation Gar” scheme, where we arevoluntarily relocating gars to the Hong KongOcean Park.

Sample 2019 Miracle Talent Education (Hong Kong) Limited All Rights Reserved3. Formal Letter/ Email3.1 General Points to be NotedGreetingDODON’TDear Sir/ Madam,Hello,Dear Editor,How are you?Dear Ms. Tam,Dear Ms. Melody Tam,Complementary Yours sincerely, (youBest,Closeknow who yourLove,recipient is)Best wishes,Yours faithfully, (you DONOT know who yourrecipient is)Best regards, (a bit lessformal but stillacceptable)Expressing為保障完整版學 生,部分內容受到遮蓋criticismSeemingly, it is true that Since XXX is moreXXX is far moreimportant than YYY, Iimportant than YYY.disagree with However, afterconsidering ZZZ, I am20

Sample 2019 Miracle Talent Education (Hong Kong) Limited All Rights Reserved3.2 Transformation Exercise: Informal Letter to FormalLetterInformal letterHi there,We’re writing to ask for some funding. It’s for educating studentsabout saying no to drugs. We’re sorry for telling you about this latebut we still hope you can listen to us.Let’s look at the situation right now as more and more students aregetting addicted to drug. They aren’t aware of the how bad takingdrugs is, so when their friends ask them to try, they’ll simply goahead. (Content continues )In a nutshell, we should not underestimate the power of education.We hope you can adopt our suggestions. Just ask us anything if youhave questions. Thank you and write back to us if you have time!Best,Chris22

Sample 2019 Miracle Talent Education (Hong Kong) Limited All Rights Reserved8. Speech/ Debate Speech8.1 Speech/ Debate Speech TemplateIntroduction:1. Good morning respected judges, my honorableDebate Speechopponents and members of the audience.2. It’s an honor here to speak of my views on themotion about XXX.3. Our team strongly agrees/ is strongly opposedto this motion.4. I’d like to outline the reasons now.Introduction: Good morning ladies and gentlemen.Ordinary Follow the normal “TAIPO?” steps.Speech MUST-HAVES:Aim Identity(SelfIntroduction) OutlineIncrease I believe most of you still remember XXXInteractions I am sure every one of you does not bear towitness XXX. I guess most of you XXX.為保障完整版學 生,部分內容受到遮蓋 Let me tell you a fact: S V O.RhetoricalQuestions/Question tags But could XXX afford these expenses? No, anemphatic no. What would happen if XXX? Wouldn’t my worthy opponents agree with

Sample 2019 Miracle Talent Education (Hong Kong) Limited All Rights Reserved8.2 Speech Sample Essay (1)Learning English through social issuesYou have graduated from university and have become a careerscounselor. You are giving a speech at the graduation ceremony at theschool, and you have been asked to give a speech to graduatingstudents about choosing jobs in the future. In your speech, discusswhat factors students should consider when choosing a career, suggesta job they could choose in the future and explain what most otherpeople in Hong Kong think about this job.Good morning Principal, professors and graduates. Before I begin myspeech today, let me ask you graduates a question: what kind of jobswill you choose in the future? Well, I can see some bewildered facesin the audience and so I hope my speech today can inspire youall. Being the careers counselor from the Hong Kong Youth Association,it's my great honour to be offered an opportunity to give a speech atsuch a prestigious university - The University of Heung Shing. Today, I'dlike to talk about why being a teacher is one of the best ways ofcontributing to society, though some people in society nowadays maylook down on this job.What pops up in mind when it comes to the factors of finding a job?[Question tag] I [Increase interactions] believe some of you [Increase

Sample 2019 Miracle Talent Education (Hong Kong) Limited All Rights Reservedinteractions] will immediately think of monetary rewards and fame,imagining that you're [Increase interactions] the next top lawyer ordoctor in society. However, of the multitude of factors of choosing ajob, probably the most important one is the opportunity ofcontributing to society. Being a metropolis and the Asian financial hub,utilitarianism () is prevalent in Hong Kong and many willconsider money as the sole factor when they choose their jobs. Iunderstand that money is indispensable () in our lives, butjust try to imagine [Increase interactions]: will you be mentallysatisfied when one day you become a phenomenal entrepreneurearning buckets of money, yet giving nothing back to society?[Question tag] Being brought up in the Asian financial hub thatattaches inordinate importance to material life, I know some of you[Increase interactions] may be still hesitating, but I'm sure most of youhave participated in volunteering work before. Don't you recall thespiritual satisfaction that you gained when you lent a hand to others?[Question tag] The valuable feeling can never be replaced by soullessmoney, can it? [Question tag]The concept of contributing to society is rather vague so many of youmay ask [Increase interactions: what job should I choose then?[Question tag] It's virtually impossiblefor me[Increase interactions to make a living if I become a full-time volunteer!

Sample 2019 Miracle Talent Education (Hong Kong) Limited All Rights ReservedI'm going to tell you [Increase interactions that being a teacher is infact one of the best ways to strike a balance between making a livingand contributing to society. As an educator, you're [Increaseinteractions] actually cultivating the future leaders in society. Being ateacher enables you [Increase interactions] to instill correct moralconcepts into students' mind, facilitating their all-round developmentand avoiding them 為保障完整版學 生,部分內容受到遮蓋to become complacent individuals who thinkeverything revolves around them. You [Increase interactions] mayeven make significant changes to others' lives! Take myself as anexample [Striking a chord with the audience]: I was diagnosed withADHD since I was in primary school, which prevented me fromconcentrating in class, leading to my disastrous academic results. I'mso grateful that I met Ms Tse, my class teacher in form 2 who was socaring that she offered me free remedial classes in the afternoon toensure that I fully understood what was taught in the morning. Onlyafter then did I regain confidence and motivation to learn and Irealized the fact that all adversity can be triumphed overas long as you're determined enough. Without the dedication andpatience of Ms Tse, I won't be able to stand here today and share withyou all. Don't you want to become a person who can positivelyinfluence our next generation?While mentioning why being a teacher can be so meaningful, many ofyou [Increase interactions] may still look down on this job. Some of

Sample 2019 Miracle Talent Education (Hong Kong) Limited All Rights Reserved9. Feature Article (Or many Part AEssays)9.1 Feature Article Template/ Skills[MRSDIP à Mrs. Dip à]Make up detailsReveal Secretsn To our surprise, XXX.n Many people might think that XXX.However, this is not what I think. In fact,XXX.n When asked about XXX, most of XXX willbe unanimous in their answer – XXX.While without doubt that XXX is true, myexperience is a little bit different.n In fact/ In actual fact, XXX.n XXX. Yes, that is right, but I can tell n Pronouns: I/ Youn Rhetorical questions/ question tags65

Sample 2019 Miracle Talent Education (Hong Kong) Limited All Rights Reservedn Strike a chord with readers: like every oneof you, XXX.Playful Tonen Try to be humourousn DON’T use moreover, furthermore (tooformal!)66

Sample 2019 Miracle Talent Education (Hong Kong) Limited All Rights Reserved9.2 Feature Article Sample Essay (1)Learning English through Short StoriesAs an editor of your school newspaper, you got a chance to interviewa famous writer in town and he/she shared with you his/her writingexperience. You have found the writer's personal experience trulyinspiring. Write a feature article for the school newspaper. Describehis/her journey of becoming famous and include some of the writer'stips about writing short stories.Rebecca Robertson's Road To Success[Make up the details] 'Amazing Journey', 'Mystery of the Locked Box','Sparkling Stars' – [Interactions] You may have heard of these famousbooks written by Rebecca Robertson, who is hailed as the one of themost successful female short story writers worldwide. Some of herbooks, such as [Make up the details] 'Missing Chances' and 'TheParticular Joy of the Apple Tree', were adapted to make movies.[Interactions] How did she create all these amazing stories? Read [Aim]this feature article to know more about her unique path of writing!A lot of [Interactions] you may wonder how Rebecca Robertson waswhen she was a child. [Reveal Secrets] What is her secret of being afamous writer? In fact, she was brought up by her grandparents in a67

Sample 2019 Miracle Talent Education (Hong Kong) Limited All Rights Reservedsmall town because both of her parents worked in the city to make aliving. When she was a child, there was barely any entertainment apartfrom reading books, which was her grandfather's favorite activity.[Dialogues] 'My grandpa read a lot,' Rebecca laughed, 'he was simplya bookworm, to be honest.'[Reveal Secrets] To our surprise, [Interactions] like some of you,Rebecca had no interest in reading at first as she held the perceptionthat books were dull and monotonous. Compared with reading novels,Rebecca loved to doodle and draw pictures. However, when sheshowed her work to her buddies and teachers, they did not get themessage behind the picture and it dampened Rebecca's enthusiasm indrawing.[Dialogues] 'How come everyone doesn't understand the meaningbehind my work?' Rebecca asked herself. Seeing her frustration, hergrandfather told her that writing may be an alternative way to expressher messages. Rebecca was reluctant to read and write at first, but hergrandfather insisted to read her short stories at bedtime. Gradually,she was captivated by the attractive characters and the spellbindingplots.[Dialogues] 'I felt like I entered another world. Everything was new and68

3. Formal Letter/ Email 3.1 General Points to be Noted 3.2 Transformation Exercise: Informal Letter to Formal Letter 4. Letter of Reply/ Defensive Letter 4.1 Template 4.2 Letter of Reply Sample Essay (2014 Paper 3 Part B Task 10) Sample

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